Hi Peter,
I fully agree with Barry's comment!
Of course, it really depends on what you want your web page to be but, for me, I think it is best if it reflects your personality (through the way you use language) rather than being some anonymous - but with perfectly-formed English - piece.
To be really picky, if you wanted to, you could change a couple of spellings/typos on your About page...
- trie - try
- healty - healthy
but neither detract from the sense of the piece. Hope this helps.
Keep up the good work!
cheers,
Steve